The Plot That Sucked

Hello faithful blog readers!

Back again today with part 3 of the notes from the writersroom seminar. Today's should be fairly brief...

COHERENCE

Your script needs to have a strong plot that holds everything together. This should be fairly obvious to anyone who's an aspiring screenwriter, but there are so many people who get it wrong! You can have lots of great ideas, good scenes, etc., but you still need a clear plot that connects these things and also comes to a satisfactory resolution.

One example of a film which (in my opinion) fails to accomplish this, is "The Boat That Rocked" by great writer Richard Curtis. It's full of great little scenes and moments that can be comedic, touching, or even heartbreaking. As a whole, however, it is very unsatisfying. The overall central plot is extremely weak, and there are too many little plots all happening at once, with no real resolution or sense of story.

It's very easy to get carried away when you're "in the zone" and to try to do too much, but you need to beware of being distracted from the focus of your story. You may write a scene that you really like, but, if it's not moving the plot along, does it really need to be there?

Lastly, you need to know the world, tone and genre of your script, then make sure that you are faithful to this throughout. What kind of story is it? This harks back to the stuff about format from part one of these blogs, but again - your audience needs to know what they are watching, and to "get it" very quickly. There's nothing wrong with writing in a specific genre, the trick is learning how to be original and surprising within that world.

Alright. That's all for part 3. Catch you later!

L.

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